The Naming of Cats (Metrical Analysis)

Posted for by Ferrick Gray

A Note to the Reader

You should know that I am a great admirer of T. S. Eliot. I rank him as the greatest poet, dramatist, critic and perhaps even philosopher of the twentieth century, and now. Many things have been written about him, some true, some not so true but that happens with great people. I do not agree with everything he has to say, but that does not mean he is right, or I am wrong. There is a lot to do with opinion in many facets of poetry, drama, critique and philosophy. You may ask: Who would dare criticize one of the greats? It is easy to be critical, especially when the one you may criticize is no longer living, they have no chance to respond. However, I believe we are allowed. to provided we are respectful. Let’s face it, none of us are going to achieve what Eliot achieved living or dead. Admittedly, he would likely think some of this is a total waste of time, but nevertheless it is interesting, even if it is just for me.

Metrical Analysis
“The Naming of Cats”

This metrical analysis of Eliot’s The Naming of Cats demonstrates his keenness for traditional meters but stepping away from the stricter iambic pentameter. We must also realize that this and other poems were written for children, so it is expected that the meter will reflect the mood of the poem. For convenience, I have split the poem into quatrains for analysis. For most of the original, lines were indented to follow the rime scheme.

Verses 1-4

Thĕ Nāmĭng | ŏf Cāts | ĭs ă dīf | fĭcŭ̄lt | māttĕr
Ĭt īsn’t | jŭst ōne | ŏf yo͝ur hōl | ĭdăy gāmes
Yŏu māy | thĭnk ăt fīrst | Ĭ’m ăs mād | ăs ă̄ | hāttĕr
Whĕn Ĭ tēll | yo͝u ă cāt | mŭst hăve THRE͞E | DĪFFĔR | ĔNT NĀMES

What is noticeable is that line lengths are not consistent. The fact is that this is not an issue in such a poem. We also notice that the verse construction is not consistent. Again, not an issue. There is a wonderful smattering of anapests which are responsible for the distinctive rhythm. Amphibrachs, iambs and trochees add their touch to alter the rhythm of some verses.

Some may disagree with the scansion of verses 1 and 3 in which I have indicated a promoted metrical accent. If you read these lines carefully, there is a slightly more emphasis at those points albeit very close to the preceding syllable.

Verses 5-8

Fĭrst ŏf āll | thĕre’s thĕ nāme | thăt thĕ fām | ĭly̆ ūse | dāily̆
Sūch ăs | Pētĕr | Ăugūstŭs | Ălōnzŏ | ŏr Jāmes
Sūch ăs | Vīctŏr ŏr | Jōnăthăn | Ge͞orge ŏr Bĭll | Bāilĕy
Āll ŏf thĕm | sēnsĭblĕ | ēvery̆ | dăy nāmes

Again, the anapest makes its presence known, but so too the dactyl which occurs to amplify expression and the names.

Verses 9-12

Thĕre āre | fāncĭĕr | nāmes ĭf yo͝u | thīnk thĕy so͝und | swe͞etĕr
Sōme fŏr thĕ | gēntlĕmĕn | sōme fŏr | thĕ dāmes
Sūch ăs | Plātŏ | Ădmētŭs | Ĕlēctră | Dĕmētĕr
Bŭt āll | ŏf thēm | sēnsĭblĕ | ēvery̆ | dăy nāmes

Anapests and dactyls dominate these verses, but the amphibrach makes its presence known with some of the names.

Verses 13-16

Būt Ĭ | tēll yo͝u | ă cāt ne͝eds | ă nāme thăt’s | părtīculăr
Ă nāme | thăt’s pē | cūlĭăr | ănd mōre |dīgnĭfĭed
Ĕlse hōw | căn hĕ ke͞ep | ŭp hĭs tāil | pērpĕn | dīcŭlăr
Ŏr spre͞ad o͝ut | hĭs whīskĕrs | ŏr chērĭsh | hĭs prīde

Verses 17-20

Ŏf nāmes | ŏf thĭs kīnd | Ĭ căn gīve | yo͝u ā | qu͞orŭm
Sūch ăs | Mūnkŭstrăp | Qu͞oxŏ | ŏr Cōrĭ | ŏpāt
Sūch ăs | Bōmbă | lŭrīnă | ŏr ĕlse Jēl | ly̆lōrŭm
Nāmes thăt | nēvĕr | bēlŏng | tŏ mōre | thăn ŏne cāt

Verses 13 to 20 are very typical of an iambic rhythm or what I may call a pentameter-pace. Notice the various metrical substitutions.

Verses 21-24

Bŭt ăbōve | ănd bĕyōnd | thĕre’s stĭll ōne | nāme lĕft | ōvĕr
Ănd thāt | ĭs thĕ nāme | thăt yo͝u nēv | ĕr wĭll gu͞ess
Thĕ nāme thăt | nŏ hūmăn | rĕse͞arch căn | dĭscōvĕr
Bŭt THĔ CĀT | HĬMSĔLF KNŌWS | ănd wĭll nēv | ĕr cŏnfēss

These verses illustrate more of the tetrameter characteristics with their rhythm. Again, there are many metrical substitutions, mainly the anapest which gives these verses a pleasant sound.

Verses 25-28

Whĕn yo͝u nō | tĭce ă cāt | ĭn prŏfo͞und | mēdĭ | tāti͝on
Thĕ rēasŏn | Ĭ tēll yo͝u | ĭs ālwăys | thĕ sāme
Hīs mĭnd ĭs | ĕngāged | ĭn ă rāpt | cōntĕm | plāti͝on
Ŏf thĕ tho͞ught | Ŏf thĕ tho͞ught | Ŏf thĕ tho͞ught | ŏf hĭs nāme

A similar pattern emerges from verses 13 to 28, mainly in terms of the anapest creating a melodic flow. The whole has become quite musical.

Verses 29-31

Hīs ĭn | ēffăblĕ | ēffăblĕ
Ēffănĭn | ēffăblĕ
De͞ep ănd ĭn | scrūtăblĕ | sīngŭ | lăr Nāme

In these last three verses the dactyls take charge and give a much faster rhythm. Effanineffable is an interesting word, but I am sure that you can work that one out. A little naughty.

I have read in a rather poor review of this poem stating that it was a whimsical poem written in iambic tetrameter. I cannot even see how this would be possible (the iambic tetrameter) or why it is whimsical. They produced no reason for either statement. However, depending on your reading there may be four stronger speech stresses which at best you might say is tetrameter, but this would require the introduction of some very uncommon metrical substitutions which would make it very wrong. Many poems of this form will make use of dactyl, amphibrach and mostly anapestic feet which are valid substitutions for the iamb. The best you could say here is loose iambic pentameter as an iambic rhythm can be detected in some verses. The reason is from the three-syllable feet and metrical accent promotion or demotion which sits well with speech stress. Around ten verses possess the tetrameter rhythm, but most lean toward the pentameter with the occasional verse of lesser feet at the end. However, there is no requirement to classify an entire poem as being composed of regular, specific feet.

Interesting Facts

  • The Naming of Cats originally appeared in a letter to Eliot’s godson Tom Faber dated January 7, 1936. View the first page here, and the second page here. The name Augustus does not appear in the original version of the letter at verse 6. The letter contains the verse:

Such as Victor, Alonzo, or Betty or James

  • Note that Augustus is not the full name of Gus the Theatre Cat. His name was Asparagus.
  • Andrew Lloyd Webber’s musical Cats is based on Old Possum’s Book of Practical Cats by Eliot. His wife Valerie gave permission to change some poems for musical interpretation and to add others. Listen to the cast reciting The Naming of Cats. There is something quite eerie about it, and then listen to Eliot himself.
  • Old Possum was Ezra Pound’s nickname for Eliot.
  • Eliot won Tony Awards for Best Book of a Musical and Best Musical Score (posthumous awards).

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